The day so peaceful with your presence,
Glowing and shimmering in the rays,
Your touch to soothe the heat,
I want to warm in your embrace,
Feel a heart touching within,
Flaming until a rage is met,
And if you look carefully,
You might see just beyond the shadow,
The shadow that my heart hides behind,
Wanting to scream with love,
Love my soul has never gained,
Love my soul has never lost!
Wherein a vision is touched only
in a horizon,
Could it be more than what some look for?
But the question is never asked,
A hidden answer,
Let out,
So complex in emotion,
Look again,
Am I really there?
So just beyond those reaches
fulfillment is met,
Forever lost,
Forever kept.
Sept. 24, 1999
By: B.E. Whitehorn & Adrennia Cooper
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Written January 9th, 2002
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Ohmygod!! That was beautiful, I feel so....I dont know I just LOVE it Very Good
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awesome
I feel the emotion, and understand the heart. It reaches to the soul fo the reader. -
This awesome, as the others are. I like the feeling of being lost, but still feeling home. Keep the ink flowing out of that pen! Much love and respect.
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thank you my friend!
I'm glad I could touch something within your heart!
Bill -
oh!!
Bill this is a richly mixed piece, so much love but touched now only in a glimpse.
Brilliently portrade my friend.
Andrew -
Thank you again bucherie !
Glad you enjoyed the read ! -
So complex in emotion,
Look again,
Am I really there ?
real divine...:) -
Thank you Dianes !
I'll tell Adrennia that you liked it. -
I like how you wrote this piece...And if you look carefully,
You might see just beyond the shadow,
The shadow that my heart hides behind...
Great wording.....
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