Call it anger and hatred, at the world Outside
But aren't you really, only scratching the Surface
Could it really be only your surface, that you place Outside
And you are truly, just too scared to face This
Put on your tuff exterior, and raise up your Walls
For this is your Fortess, that you protect and Keep
And just how are you, going to truly appreciate the beauty Outside
When the beauty you seek, isn't even..."Skin Deep"
Realize you're Own Inner Beauty 1st
For it isn't the world outside that's Ugly....
It Might Just be Your Very Own Spirit
Find Yourself First!...Then Enjoy Yourself!
Peace
Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard
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I love how your writes set the reader back on their heels if they don't accept their own personal responsibility for who they are...If you're a hater...no way you'll accept the truth here...But you extend that olive branch at the end...that ray of hope for change...Find yourself then enjoy yourself...(joy comes in the morning, after we 'see' the light, eh?...)Excellent. Peace, Rhonda
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This is a great write with such words of wisdom. "Find yourself first..Then enjoy yourself". I really love that line, especially enjoy yourself. So many of us do not enjoy ourselves and our lives. We spend too much time on things that mean nothing in the end. Well done, this is great.
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nice job here i was very well enthused on the way you captured a great vision in your skin deep story nice job
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Thank you very much lil ATL
I appreciate your taking the time to check out my work here on allpoetry and truly appreciate the positive feedback Lady.
Thank you very much again
XXprophet
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Well said , the in your face truth is what you have pen
we made this place the way it is. im afraid that its a little to late to correct some things but how knows.
love the messeage pen within.
Cori
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i like this, its meaningful, powerful and true.
Great Job.
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excellent
wow this was deep and very true, I enjoyed it alot, thanks for sharing!!
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my apologizes on taking so long to reply
I truly appreciate your excellent feedback to me here. I travel a great deal outside the U.S. and it takes sometime for me to get a minute to settle down and get back to the AP.
Thanks for taking the time ,connecting to and enjoying my write here.
I truly appreciate that.
TXL
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I totally feel this piece! The outside, as you say, is a reflection of us, so when we change ourselves we change what we call our lives.
Well said, and appreciated,
Peace
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Hello Creatress and thank you for reading and connecting with my writes. I truly appreciate the excellent feedback and your enjoying my writings. I do come from all angles with my poetry style and Thank you very much for taking the time to read me.
Splattttt!! This is my mind on Paper
Thank you very much again
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tru tru tru powerful words here
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such a positive message in this with so much truth. I like that you took something that could have been cliche' and gave it a twist. kicking the negativity from the inside out is a hard thing to do -- but so many have. So glad to see such positive thoughts here...
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A powerful and thought-provoking piece
Yes, so true too. Powerful words, in such a short piece. I liked this a lot. Well done for writing this.
All the best
Wayne
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Your words carry much strength and honesty! Your passion drives through this piece.... Great Scribe!
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You have such a strong power behind your words...like you have so much to say and so little room to get it out...Find yourself first Then enjoy yourself
Thank you for sharing your mind
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this hit hard 4 me. i really loved this it!!!!!!!!! keep um cumin
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I always enjoy to stumble into your page and read the basic messages contained within your words. Such things people have forgotten and often you remind them. Keep spreading the word, someone has got to do it!
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this is a great write, im glad i stumbled onto ur poetry, i wish i could write like this, ur are very good
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Thank you for the positive responses and the excellent feedback. I truly appreciat that and thank you very much for taking the time to read my writings and connect with them.
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ur welcome u should read some of mine, and let me know what u think, i would appreciate it, aint gotten any latly
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