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My Gift


Anxious without you,
Anxiously wanting you.

I feel you in my head even with the distance we are apart.
I swear you where touching me even though it's yet to start.
Trying to make me whimper,
Trying to make me moan,
Trying to make me scream,
Trying to make me lose control.

I've got this ache in my heart that just won't quit
This ache between my thighs that all the self induced cumming

in the world won't itch.
This ache settling in my soul that swears up and down you are my goal.

I'll get down on my knees for you,
I'll proudly wear this collar for you,
I'll even call you Master, but only for you.

You can have this girl made of fleeting dreams,
You can have this never ending epiphany,
You can have the protégé of the Goddess of Love,
You can have everything I am made of.

You are the deciding factor of my heart.
You are the reason emotions I've never had,
Have had a start.
You are more then I ever bargained for,
More then I ever want to lose,
More then I understand,
And more then I knew I could touch.
You are everything
And I find my everything in you.

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  • subbie
    November 6

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    wow! This is the most powerful writing i've ever read. It is absolutely beautiful and packed with heart felt meaning.

    i sent the link to it to my Master last night for him to read as i am not the best at communicating some of my most inner feelings, the same that are conveyed so well in this poem. He loved it.


  • FaythonFire
    October 12
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    beatiful...i relate


  • Selestial
    March 8

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    Awsome!

    Very expressive... had I not the ability to express how I feel to my Master... this would be something I would want him to read.

    My favorite line: "I'll even call you Master, but only for you." So true!

  • Wisdom 1
    October 3, 2007
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    Nice writetup, quite of effusion.

    More poetic language could convey much vent sans words in cascade.


  • ruchira
    October 3, 2007
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    its awesome work!!! very expressive poem!!! keep it up dear!!!


  • swcaitlin18
    October 2, 2007

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    Very interesting. I only ask that you double check that you're using the correct words in sentences ie; were vs. where.

    Otherwise I liked it. Nice work.


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    October 2, 2007

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    wow, this poem is powerful. The words show true devotion and care fot he person it is writen about. Thanks for sharing it with us, its awesome

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