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Meridiana

Meridiana

When Gerbert of Aurillac came of age
Loving the daughter of  Provost of Rheims
Rejected he despaired and came to rage
Projected future ill as it would seem
Thus loss in love had darkly set the stage
To live in shadows of what might have been
Yet, in the hollow darkness of the night
An evil hooked this boy and drew him tight

Meridiana came, a beauteous maid
Off’ring herself and money to the boy
Her being lovely he was not afraid
He found her both precocious and so coy
She promised him that if he faithful stayed
Then magically she’d give him wealth and joy
He could not stop, he to her bound his soul
And to the evil woman gave control

He stayed with her and prospered rapidly
Becoming soon the Archbishop of Rheims
Gave her perverted dealings sexually
His life was full of decadent good times
Accepting his bondage most shamefully
He never gave a thought to aiding crimes
A man of selfish stature and great lust
The partner of an evil succubus

She fed upon him every night the same
And kept him tightly tethered to her needs
Ravenna’s Cardinal Gerbert then became
More powerful to do her dirty deeds
And never feeling any sort of shame
Such callousness of heart selfishness breeds
Meridiana woman of the night
Who makes a man lose goodness from his sight

He then became Revenna’s Archbishop
Yet, had ambitions beyond other men
Then Gerbert of Aurillac became Pope
And called himself Sylvester the second
Meridiana finally has the scope
To do her evil deviousness then
She came to him his death to prophesy
A piece of cross showed where his death would be

He went then to Jerusalem for mass
Knowing the cross piece there meant he would die
Then Gerbert found his Christian heart at last
Confessing evil sins from days gone by
Although his fate had been already cast
He died repentant, and his soul was free
His tomb in the Lateran now sweats death
When e’er a Pope shall draw his final breath

 

 

 

 

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  • silvenechoes
    September 25, 2007

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    This is an interesting legend. :)

    I hadn't logged into Allpoetry for awhile, and ran across this poem in a search engine while doing research on Pope Sylvester II. There doesn't seem to be too much info (that I can find) on Meridiana -- there's this legend of the succubus, and also one of a bronze "talking head," created by Sylvester II, that could only answer "yes" and "no" questions. Dark, enchanting words you have here. I'd love to chat with you about your sources if you're so inclined.

  • luvdrkchocolate
    August 5, 2007

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    Oh. This is a very interesting poem that you have written. I like story poems so I was happy to sit here and read it all even though it was kind of long. I don't remember hearing about him before but I think I'll have to go and goggle it to see what it says. I think you did a good job of repaying him though.


  • ventus11
    July 4, 2007

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    Not an interesting subject. Not an interesting title. You never gravved by attension. I found it hard to stay focused on the poem. I had the feeling that you were really trying to make it feel like classical poetry.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    June 23, 2007

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    This is a "serious" poem and is well written in so far as it is literate, grammatical and correctly punctuated. It seems to me to be a little "over-written" in so far as it is deliberately archaic. The subject itself is not of much interest to me personally. A well-crafted poem, but not very interesting perhaps - too much concerned with narrative and not enough imagery.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 10, 2007

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    Would that we could all compose such beauty as this.

    I for one surmised that beneath the beneath the clownish exterior, was the soul of a master poet.
    Perfectly done, Allan. Bunnies and points only trivialize this work of art, but they are all I have to give.
    Buddy


  • kooleyes
    June 10, 2007

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    Perfect

    This poem had me from start to finish. It is by far the best poem I have had the honor to read. If E A Poe was a live today he would say the samething. This is awesome. Thanks for the read and keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Ravenblood
    June 10, 2007

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    very nicely done. the rhyme and rythem were fantastic. Its a wonderful story and i wish you the best in the contest.
    Claire-Anne


  • Peteskid gold member
    June 10, 2007

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    very well done here the evil pontiff was a favorite of a cadre of erotic writers, the corrupted symbol of the church, a most inviting target for evil, expressive and descriptive here in impeccable meter and rhyme, so very impressive...PK


  • Cannonsfire
    June 10, 2007

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    Brilliant, verbose, succinct, sublime er need dictionary now ran out of big words Love, C


  • dixiebme
    June 10, 2007

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    I'm not concerned with punctuations, I still can appreciate a good write. My mother always said "if, you can't say something nice, don't say anything at all" be proud.


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 9, 2007

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    I would be quiet proud of this, sweet Poet.
    You have done well. I love reading this
    side of you - it shows me that there is more
    underneath. Hope you're wearing undies
    Love, Lane


  • manoguru
    June 9, 2007
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    please put proper punctuations in the piece...

  • mcheadle
    June 9, 2007

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    Yhis is quit q story

    Alot of though, I'm sure went inot tis piece.
    They have a lot going for them you are right.
    Good piece of penmanship in it.


  • blondone
    June 9, 2007

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    Grand writing you are very talented, the words are strong and powerful the imagery is outstanding ~ Wishing you the best of luck in this contest...

    To live in shadows of might have been ~ very strong message thank you for this read I found this in the spotlight


  • Fug-azi
    June 9, 2007

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    Nice to see my tattoo making the rounds.

    Apart from that I enjoyed the poem, well executed with an excellent flow throughout.


  • earthstar
    June 2, 2007

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    Excellent

    The imagery is very well done it draws the reader into the work. This is not a causal read. It a story in a story which is very well done. The details make the words come alive with feelings. I like how you wrote it in a timeless style. I very impress by your mixture of forms it truly is a remarkable write. Content is excellent. I like the portray of dark versus good. How easy it for a good person to slip. I like the conflict it played out very well.The closer was awesome. The last paragraph is very impressive. You use each line and word very wisely.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    This is brilliant, packed with so much detail, an educational look at the succubus indeed! Anexcellent use of Ottava Rima form too. A look back into histories and origins, rather than of a deeply sexual nature - ignore me...fragmented thoughts This was very well written and orchestrated and I thank you forsharing it with me. Be well. Laura


    • PerVirtuous
      June 2, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment. This was for Amera and you as a present for your demonesses. A different perspective. Glad you liked it.


  • Poetdontknowit
    June 2, 2007

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    WHOA

    This is an awesome write. Such brilliant vocabulary and emotion. It is beautifully written! love it
    POETDONTKNOWIT


  • rhondasail
    June 1, 2007

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    I have no words...you bring the story out from the history and make it beautiful...thank you for sharing this one...Rhonda


  • Bazza
    June 1, 2007

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    The seeds of sin.

    A powerfully vivid story poem that keeps the reader rivetted until the end wondering if evil will suceed. A great story and one I have not heard before and wonder if it is of your conception or a known fable or classic?? I admire this type of writing and enjoyed it immensely. Certainly inspiring work. Maybe I should not have read more than The Adventures of Biggles at school but it fitted, seeing as I was always drawing aeroplanes in English classes.
    Barry


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    June 1, 2007

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    This is absolutely fantastic... its wonderful. I can tell you now I have read Tennyson and Shelley and Keats and all the greats and this wouldn't look out of place amongst them. Its... just...WOW


  • tlsledge
    June 1, 2007

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    An excellent piece. A lot of thought went into this poem. Very good rhyming. The story line is captivating. Keep on keeping on.


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 31, 2007

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    what a write! not sure what to say. fantastically penned. the story is rich. wonderful images. could picture the evil woman very well. nice, dude!


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    May 31, 2007

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    Outstanding

    Fascinating. Well written scholarly piece. I have received an education today, I knew nothing of this
    previously.  I'll have to read more...lol, I made a quick trip to wikipedia...I'm not Catholic but there
    "doings" interest me in a historical manner. This has definitly rekindled my interest. Huzzah!!


  • HaleyMary
    May 31, 2007

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    This is amazing. Beautiful imagery in this piece. It makes me think of a story out of the Bible or just of something that took place a long time ago in history. Keep up the excellent work. This was really good. You should try to get it published.


  • Amera gold member
    May 31, 2007

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    I STOP…I LOOK at you… I read this poem again then I read it once more. This my love, is a world class masterpiece. A mathematically perfect composition reflecting a tenth century scholar. You actually did justice to the creator of the quadrivium which consisted of arithmetic, geometry, music, and astronomy. I looked that up because I forgot about music. This poem is of the best I have ever read on the Internet. You amaze me everyday but today you have totally floored me in creativity, composition and cognizant intellectual thinking. To say Bravo does not do justice to perfection; I’m so proud of you.

    Love,
    Amera ♥

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