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The Hole You Left...

Softest of breezes billowing in me,
lingering beyond kisses on my cheeks,
speaks of love once held, suddenly let go.

Rays of sunshine upon my golden skin,
warming the chill within my saddened heart,
tells of a day memories did not kill.

Night beams falling from the moon’s sweetened face,
bring hope to a soul once suicidal,
leaves dreams where the hole that was once you was.

Hope, creating beauty, brings new life here,
whispering tomorrow’s promise with love,
exhales all that I need to survive now.

Author notes

when he left, i wanted to die. now, i live life.

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  • depressedforeva
    May 31, 2007
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    Keep writing and express your self in everyway

  • deleteit
    May 31, 2007

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    I could not only feel the transformation but I could just picture it as well. Let the beauty of your heart keep radiating in life and your talent in writing


  • Razor-Blade Romance
    May 31, 2007
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    Amazing !!! Well done !
    I love this piece !! It is very emotional ! Good Luck !