Softest of breezes billowing in me,
lingering beyond kisses on my cheeks,
speaks of love once held, suddenly let go.
Rays of sunshine upon my golden skin,
warming the chill within my saddened heart,
tells of a day memories did not kill.
Night beams falling from the moon’s sweetened face,
bring hope to a soul once suicidal,
leaves dreams where the hole that was once you was.
Hope, creating beauty, brings new life here,
whispering tomorrow’s promise with love,
exhales all that I need to survive now.
Author notes
when he left, i wanted to die. now, i live life.
A contest entry
- Express your feelings by Razor-Blade Romance.
313 points, ended June 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Keep writing and express your self in everyway
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I could not only feel the transformation but I could just picture it as well. Let the beauty of your heart keep radiating in life and your talent in writing


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Amazing !!! Well done !
I love this piece !! It is very emotional ! Good Luck !


