Why are you not here?
I'm all alone
I'm here without you
Your soft touch, your heartwarming presence
and all but gone from me
Why can't I be with you?
It's like fate is playing with me
I've got no control
If only you were here beside me
Then life would never be bad
And fate would be forgotten
How can I watch you?
Being with another man, holding him
While I watch on, knowing that it will never happen
How am I meant to move on when I'm still in love with you?
We're friends forever yet never together...
A contest entry
- Express your feelings by Razor-Blade Romance.
313 points, ended June 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
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This is my first poem so please let me know what you think.
Comments
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This is a terrific start~ I see the raw talent just waiting to break free and fly! I like what you wrote~ I can't wait to read the next one!
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I can relate
to this its so similar to what I have been through "Being with another man, holding him"
"How am I meant to move on when I'm still in love with you" hit home . good write
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Nice !!! I really do relate to this poem !! Nicely done !!!
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