To time people are fragile
Time has a permanent hold on us the moment we are born.
it allows us to grow and to get big
we go to school, find jobs, fall in love, get married,have children
Time lets us have these things
But then in the end, it kills us
Time is only like a friend
But only for a time.
A contest entry
- Dreams......... by Maybe Anastasia.
300 points, ended September 1, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm am so bored Give me something to do by Miss Chievous.
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lol sooooo true
this is so true that way u have to live life with out regrats and have fun and live throw the pains and be brave and do alot of stuff befor there time is up lol this is a very good poem thanks for written it
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Love it!
I agree
time is a friend but not for long!
thnaks for entering -
great it expresses the time of life.
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great job! this is really great and so so true. i wish we had more time in the world too, it seems like theres not enough of it and what we do have goes by to fast to notice..keep up the good writing!
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this poem is really good
i really like it
it seems that all of your poems are really good
your poems are all really deep
and you area a great poet
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Time has a permanent hold on us the moment we are born.
it allows us to grow and to get big
we go to school, find jobs, fall in love, get married,have children
Time lets us have these things
But then in the end, it kills us
Time is only like a friend was my favorite good job -
for your first poem here its probaly better then some ive seen(ouch!) its insitful and has meaning. i look forward to your next poem!
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that was really pretty! excellent 1st poem 2 have on here!
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Welcome to allpoetry
Very insightful and deep. You are wise beyond your years. Time is all those things. But at the end is just the beginning if you are a person of faith.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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