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A Classic Start

We once were classy,

all that changed when the glassy window broke by,

MY BROTHER!

We got to the stage of pig,

Actually a big fat pig.

 

We got to the stage of slobs.

House was white to brown.

Do you know why?

(sigh)

 

When we got the dog,

He made such a mess!

We called the cleaners address and there was nothing they could do,

With all that pooh!

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  • Siby Anan
    May 31, 2007
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    lol! I like the ending it's so funny! ^_^


  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    May 31, 2007

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    yuck! that is really about all i can say here. thank you for sharing your talent with me today. viyanna rosemarie


  • X-SaNiTy-AsSaSsiN-x
    May 31, 2007
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    good job :D

    ewwww...... dog sh.... crap... ugh our dog ALWAYS goes in the house it's really really really very annoying. anyway, this is pretty good, one typo error... "actually a pig fat pig" I think the first pig in that line was supposed to be "big". But maybe not. this is humorous, cute... I like it.
    ~*~goth&sweet - Bo~*~