When I first saw you,
I laughed
When you talked to me,
I was a bitch
I let you be my 'friend',
Just to tease you
I think the only reason why you took it,
Is because you wanted someone to talk to
I pitied you,
Like I was the bigger person
Then I moved away
I miss you so much
I realized that you were a true friend
I would give my life now back,
just to have treated you better
I'm sorry Katie
A contest entry
- Past Regrets by XHollowXEyesX.
500 points, ended September 24, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow this is such a sad and touching write. the simply structure and easy flow of it made it relaxing to read and added to the heartbreaking sadness of it all.
beautifull.
Thanks for entering
All the best
~Hollow~ -
a coupling of spelling mistakes..
the structures made narrow allows words more spacing when read...and thereby suiting the matter in very beautiful manner.
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Awwwwwww. Thank you for the wonderful write, and good luck in my contest.
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Sorry I didn't spell alot of stuff right. I should've looked it over.
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