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All Wrong

No Humpty
You forgot the wall
All of you...
Where are your horses
This is so not happening
Don't you know
We can't put him together again?

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  • esroddo silver member
    June 4, 2007

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    Cheery write

    Short and sweet and great humor. I can't ask for more. Well enjoyed and applauded. Thank you for entering and good luck (Lisa)


  • Brazos silver member
    June 1, 2007

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    Ah, so it was Humpty-Dumpty...

    I wasn't sure at first viewing, until I read your post. That Humpty, always jumping off walls and stuff, and breaking his crown [reminds me off my kids, lol].

    But this time he overdid it, and the King doesn't have enough horses and men to cover it. Perhaps they should apply for another funding loan, LOL!

    A light and cheerful write for a light and cheerful picture, way to go.

    Best of luck to you in the contest,
    Brazos