Oh little boy lost,
go blow your mind
and think upon such things
as girls and dames
and princesses
of kingdoms and of kings.
you are so lost
oh little boy gone
to think yourself such thing-
of sword and steel
and chivalry
sworn fealty to a king.
The princess so sweet
your maiden afar
she never can be yours
and still you try
to please her mind
with all your earthly chore.
Author notes
#2- It is chivalry that dooms this knight.
A contest entry
- Opposites Attract by loveisthemoment.
300 points, ended June 4, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"Things" as "girls and dames"? Things?
LOL.
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This was lovely. My favorite lines were:
The princess so sweet
your maiden afar
she never can be yours
and still you try
to please her mind
with all your earthly chore.
Oh so sweet. Thank you so much for entering and following the rules!
Good luck!
Love always,
~SA -
oh, i like this poem. i like it an awful lot =]
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