(C)Loving glares
Loving glares
Why? Oh why these loving glares
Can't you see...
Your love is simply not for me
So why these loving glares?
(V1)Each night I stay awake
Thinking of your words from that day
But baby why these loving glares?
I am not the girl I use to be
(chorus)
(V2)Each morning that I awake
I think Oh this is just another day
But when we meet, my world is changed
But why pick me? Why give me those loving glares?
(chorus)
(B)Loving glares
Loving glares
My darling why these loving glares?
I can't say that I love you too
So why? Oh why these loving glares?
Loving glares 2x
Author notes
option 4. so yah this is my 1st song on ap. I hope i did okay.
A contest entry
- ◄Show Me What You Got!!► by Hebz.
425 points, ended June 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lyrics! by PoetryDove.
600 points, ended June 29, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
aww (this really sappy for me)
Comments
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You did good for your first song here on AP!
I liked this and you did a great job on it!
"Loving Glares" they're so...so...interesting, scary, loving, and hateful, right? lol
Sometimes we never really understand why certain things happen to us. Most of the time we're thinking really hard "Why me???" It's a great question in the lyrics.
I'm already interested in what type of melody it would be...there could be so many of 'em.
I liked this a lot and thanks for entering!!!
~Poetrydove~ -
WOW
OOOOhh, Very nice song..I can sing it along ..LAlalalal...very cool song..
Good Luck in the contest
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great job mademoiselle goldilocks. do ya have a melody for it?
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