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Fix My Life....

Mommy stop this fighting
I can barely stand it anymore
So she won't get any help
Is that any reason to break up this family?

Auntie stop fighting with her
It's effecting Aspen and Ky
One hates her as much as you do...
The other deathly afraid.

My life is falling apart... and I
And I don't know what to do to fix it.

Kelly don't let his ways get to you
You know he can be an ass
The car may be completely totalled
But at least you're in one piece..

My life is falling apart... and I
And I don't know what to do to fix it.

Kris, oh Kris don't hurt yourself like that
People do love you and want to see you succeed
It's one thing when I do that to myself
But sweetie please, don't hang yourself.

I know people can be cold hearted and cruel
But just forget about them; they don't know what they're talking about
Please Kris, don't I need you here as my friend?
Is that too selfish to ask?

My life is falling apart... and I
And I don't know what to do to fix it.

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  • vampire.lust.death
    August 16, 2007

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    sad defenutly sad

    wow it sorrowful vary saz make you want to help or stop or take back time i like it its biter and emotional


  • SarahEatsAirplane
    June 4, 2007

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    This is really good. I thought that you were so up front about it, and I could feel the emotion coming from it.

    Thank you for sharing this part of your life with me today.


  • skaterz14
    June 4, 2007
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    its okay

    this isnt something i would like or enjoy to read sorry


  • Poetdontknowit
    June 4, 2007

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    BRAVE

    I like it because you are so up front and honest. This is a very sad piece, but it's grand. like it
    POETDONTKNOWIT


  • melodramatic emo
    May 31, 2007
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    hmm this was deep and honest I liked this because you dont hold back good job

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