There are no words
to explain what this is,
try as they might.
There are no words
to describe how I feel,
though there are several that come close.
Love, Passion and Desire, are amongst the better one,
though Jealousy, Fear and Pain, fall amongst the ranks as well.
Several phrases stand out in my mind,
as they make their attempt
to reach this common goal.
I Love You.
I Need You.
I Miss You.
I Want You.
Notice how they all end with you?
This is because [though no words can explain it,
I will try my best]
You are my Beginning,
And my End.
You are my In-Between,
And you are my Everything.
I Love You [[Forever]]
I Need You [[Now and Always]]
I Miss You [[Every Second of Every Day]]
And I Want You [[By My Side]]
And though words can tell nothing of what I feel,
You will always have my heart.
Author notes
[[And the capitalization is deliberate.]]
The word is |L|O|V|E|
And It's option C, Kachina.
A contest entry
- Pick a Word...Any Word....(For TRUE poets ONLY!!) by xxLost-in-Lovexx.
315 points, ended June 7, 2007, 18 entries
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700 points, ended June 29, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Well....
.... Another great write for this contest I can tell I am going to have a rough time judging this contest. Thanks for entering with this well crafted poem.
"I Love You.
I Need You.
I Miss You.
I Want You.
Notice how they all end with you?"
Everything is all about you!
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This is beautiful, amazing job.
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thank you, this was written for my first and only true love, he was my inspiration, and continues to be.
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Creative and intense
The teenage pain bleeds on the page. You made other people feel also. I see the shiny gold thingy, right there, to look at. Some of your style is a joy to see. -
I love this...
I was enganged to a David for over a year and I gave my life to him... my virginity... everything... and now my father, also named David, died of brain cancer a few months ago and so I'm pretty much on the brink of distruction... I'm so sorry for everything you've been through... I'm always here...
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! For someone who cannot express in words how they feel, you sure did a remarkable job in a profound way!!! This was a uniqie piece of poetry and it had me all the way through the entire read!!!I can see why you got a gold trophy for this one as it is just nothing short of amazing!!!It reveals your very heart!!!It is rare that our very hearts come out in such a way as this has. I thank you for sharing this piece with me today!!! I just loved it all the way through!!!~~Toni~~
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AMAZING
Hun, i love the way you write.. your thoughts remind me of my own and im very proud of you!
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wow! this is absolutely amazing! i wonder if i might send this to my boyfriend. i would give you total credit for it, but it's how i feel for him. thanks for entering and good luck.
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