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i don't know where i am.
i don't know where i am going.
i hardly know where i've been.

i can't see what's ahead of me.
i can see all too clearly behind.

i feel like i am falling.
i feel like i am stuck in place.

i am lost.
i'll find myself like every other time.
i'll find myself and look in the mirror and like what i see.
i will.
i will someday.

i am lost but how else can i find myself.
how else can i grow.

what is a smile if you haven't cried before?
just another facial movement.

i might have to cry before i laugh, but i will laugh.

i don't care that i don't know where i am, where i am going, where i've been.
i don't have to yet.
for now, i can just laugh, cry and everything in between in this maze of mine.

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  • Old Fool
    July 4, 2007

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    It's not nice being in this 'nowhere' time.. One part finished, another yet to start.. No wonder you're feeling lost/stuck/generally bored..
    So, live for now, today.. Have fun, go out.. Meet new friends, new people.. And before you know it, you're back on track..
    Oh, the poem.. Yeah, I like it.. Well captured emotion with well chosen word, nice imagery.. Hmmm...
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