A gentle flame
she burns so bright and rich in life,
touching souls and hearts so radiantly,
giving inspiration's breath to many
love's light shining like a sun.
Always bringing joy and smiles
angel to make Heaven proud,
a spirit generous beyond word,
never doing less
than being more than you could ever want.
Author notes
A dedication for my precious, AP wife, Desire. The gentile flame who truly does brighten many dark days for others.
A contest entry
- ~~~Dedications~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended June 7, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thanks for entering and good luck!
hugs n kisses
preets
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What a beautiful write this is, sweetie!
I know this will touch her heart!
She is all these wonderful things and so much more; truly deserving of this piece!
All the best to you, my friend! -
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Thank you so much for the great comment.
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What a lovely dedication to Desire. She truly is a gentle flame who lifts tender spirits. Well penned!
"too many" should it be "to many"?
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Thanks for the kind comment. And for pointing out the correction.
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Oy! This is Priceless!!!
Aaaaaaaaaw Sweetness
This so made my day
Love the words You have spoken-written from Your Precious Heart
You sure know how to get the tears flowing don't ya
You brighten up my day and night~
say the words just right
Loves You!!
Thank You for ALL You do and more!!
-does Happy dance-
Did You see that
Shook my bon bon
You're a Winner in my book
-twirls lollipop-
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love~ Desire~*~
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Just doing my part to share the truth dearest.
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