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not home anymore

does a drive-by
shooter feel,
after the shooting,
anything like the way
this house makes you feel,
as it prods seeping holes
in a bullet-ridden heart?

you are the difference:
streets are unchanged.
someone else sleeps
where you slept,
dreaming the dreams
you dreamt
sitting in the kitchen
you loved,
looking
at your brown-eyed-susies

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