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I have nothing left
My mind is blank
I am lost in this world of hate.......



My fingers burn
The flesh runs red
This I cannot take        I am    Irate


I have a headache
From the wall
It srikes me down
For what Im worth
I scream out to you..............Obscenities
Full of lies and deceit


I am faking my life
Its nothing new to you
I am better off with(OUT)? you.

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Nothing new to me or you its life what can you do

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  • SUNSHiiNEx
    January 24, 2008

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    Fuck this feeling is too familiar.

    [I scream out to you..............Obscenities
    Full of lies and deceit]

    I love these lines.

    Great write<3


  • glamour guts
    January 2, 2008

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    OHHH DRAMA!!
    No,its really good,alot of emotion and
    good imagery,makes you think alot,
    Good job bby!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 29, 2007
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    very nice love the way u set it out!


  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    November 29, 2007
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    Gah!
    Amazing once again! I love it!


  • BrokenHeartOnceMore
    November 20, 2007
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    this kicks ass i like it


  • IFeedFromHisKiss
    November 14, 2007
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    this is an awsome poem


  • ImAddictedNeedyLost
    July 24, 2007

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    I love it!!!!!!! I want to see more of ur stuff Robby.. we should hang out and share some stuff sometime.. well great job.


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    July 23, 2007

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    wow babe..

    nice wright, i must say i love how you say all then drop the {{I am better off with (out) you..!!!

    i loved it bunches great poem sweetie,



  • MoonlightBeam
    July 5, 2007
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    this is really good, I really like it great write

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