A heart is not a plaything,
A heart is not a toy.
But if you want it broken,
Just give it to a boy.
Boys like to play with toys,
To see what makes them run.
But when it comes to making love,
They'll do it just for fun.
You'll wonder if he's home at night,
You'll wonder if he's true.
One moment you'll be happy,
The next you will be blue.
The reason why i'm telling,
But not to make true.
Is because i fell in love,
I F
E
LL
in love with you.
Author notes
i really had fun with this one. i hope you do to
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Hmmm the first part of this was a rhyme we used to recite at school.... anyhow... wonderful all the same
Karen
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A master piece ( That will always stand the test of time..
Your words and your reflection of truth beyond tranquility, Leave one pondering his or her own heart
As they look in the mirror, Day in and day out,
You have taken beauty and sin and weaved into a brilliantly fine tuned reflection of your soul
Thank you so much for allowing me to read and comment on your work, By the way if wife sees this shes going to think I'm sleeping with the nieighbors dog to...
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very true, and powerful, but short and it doesnt seem like its fully done
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True, emotional and amazing !!
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omg this is amaxing and soooo true!!!!!!!!!!!
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awwww .. sweet!! although i can't say i'm in the same boat as u..i never been in love...but that poem..althogh it started out kinda angsty..it ended sweetly..and it seems to be full of hope..that despite the fact u believe ur heart will be broken..u can still fall in love..human reason is not very reasonable..lol..nice piece
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