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Mother's Perfection

You think your weak
But you are strong
Strong as the panther is
When hunting an even stronger prey

You think you are dim
But you are smart
Smart as the horse when it sees
A devil lioness ready to pounce

You think you are a loner
But you are loved
Loved as the hummingbird is
When it shows off it's radiant feathers

You think you are fat
But you are thin
Thin as snake as it
Wraps it's body around the limb

You think you are hideous
But you are gourgeous
Gourgeous as the fawn in spring
As it leaps and bounces within sprigs

You think I don't love you
But I really do more than you think
I love you as God loves you
More and more with each growing day

Author notes

This is for my mom, so she knows how much I really love her.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    January 13, 2008
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    What wonderful things to say to your mother in this poem. Any mother would love to get such a poem from her son. Liked the flow, the rhythm and rhyme you used in these lines. Hope you begin posting again soon. Nothing up from you in quite a while. Hope everything is alright- all the best in the new year too.