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today?

who am I today

 

Am I perky and pretty?

  Am I single, easy, or nice?

Who am I tomorrow?

Will I grow a long beard?

Will I go out with the guys just to smoke?

Who was I last weekend?

Oh yeah, what I joke

I was ugly, pathetic, unknown

Next week I have come up with a brand new idea

I think I will try my own head

I could just be myself

No more playing or faking

But wait, I like this one instead

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i really like the contest i entered this in, everyone should check it out.

A contest entry

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  • soulfultia gold member
    May 31, 2007

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    I thought this was a good interp of the inspiration picture. Creative and well done Possibly "a joke" vs. "I joke" other than that, wonderful work Good luck in the contest and this was my pleasure to read ~Tia


  • Barbara gold member
    May 31, 2007
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    Interesting entry, and it shows the indicisions that people face daily. What face to show the world....

    The only thing I noticed wa this line "Oh yeah, what I joke" ... 'A joke' ? Beyond that, this was a good description based on the picture.

    Thank you for entering, and good luck with the contest