Willingly I partake
your lips offering
loving the burn
Addiction to poison is
Sinful yet Soothing
Brings me to your knees
Binding my Poisoned
Undead soul to your mind
Body, Love, Soul, Will
Sustaining my Existence
Time pass as i slowly fade
There is no antidote to that Poison
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice, short, yet romantic piece of poetry here.
Good job. I enjoyed reading this.
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oooh romantic and sexy... i love this poem i totally wish someone felt this way about me... too bad not all men are this romantic!!! -sigh- its a beautiful poem thank you for sharing it with the rest of us!
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What can I say your words say it all. As if your more then just addicted to her. As if you no longer can find yourself without her around to influence you. It gives me an odd sense of piece. Don't really know why but the feeling is as if your are dead but not really. The middle section is bitter sweet its unexpected after you read the first couple lines but maybe not surprising so much as just intriguing.
~Dragonia~
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wow...
wow vince..you've finally written something...i love it. its so powerful and emotional, with a great theme. great job!
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Very nice, indeed.
Posion in two soft red petals, parting invitingly. Their deception and salvation is but one in the same,
An infinte feeling for the eternal soul...
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Love can be like a poison sometimes, but sometimes it can be all you need. I liked this piece. You have created a nice feel and a nice flow to the words, and it kind of sets a scene in my mind as i read. The flow seems slow and languid, which makes it nice to read, and allows each word to sink in. Nice piece indeed!
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*shivers* don't know why but it knida hit something and made me go "woah". I liked the way you wrote this. exceelent job.
~Kitten~
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