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Darfur

Your name is
a memory breeze
Darfur,
you live inside of me.

But the blood being shed
and the lives you lost
asked for so much more
than democracy.

Your legacy is
a memory never to be seized.

Humans are empowered
against the majoritys will,
People are imprisoned
dreams go unfulfilled.

As I wait
for my country to prosper
I remember
that in my blood
is Darfur.

Tears become
like the Nile

A rampage with a gun,
my family was displaced.
Agencies for hope
couldnt stop the bloody rape.

It makes me sick
to know where I come from
a bloodstained warzone,
a sickening gulp of rum.

Your name is
a memory breeze.
Darfur,
you're still a part of me.



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  • SoS
    October 1, 2007

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    I love this. It's as if it's saying, "Darfur is a memory to me, but it hasn't ended."

    God Bless,
    Jes

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    This is a very nice write. My favorite lines are

    Humans are empowered against the majoritys wil,People are imprisoned dreams go unfulfilled.

    thank you for your entry best wishes xxx