Oh mighty pen
of such thunderous roar in ink,
you have taken eyes
to skip upon the clouds
with the airy feathers
stroking from your magnificent,
golden creative plume.
How you are envied by some
and adored by others,
a verse god sublime
dwelling upon an accolade throne
in the loftiest poetic Elysium.
Today we salute and celebrate
that moment
when you first came to life.
Wondering, secretly,
did you come out of the womb
toting a quill?
You need not make us drool
over whether destiny so blessed.
For we shall simply sit
and lament
why you always in a contest
beat our very best!
A contest entry
- Help! i really need some inspiration by lucy sky-diamond.
600 points, ended July 14, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a wonderful poem, i especially love the ending, so true. i have a feeling i have read this before, in a contest for individuality? anyway, thank you very much for this wonderful entry, and bets of luck
lucy
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Thank you for the wondeful comment.
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I think he must have been born with a quill in his hand
Very cool poem
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Thank you for the great coment. Don't think he is going to say for sure one way or the other.
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LOL...I had to giggle at this. Some of the metaphors were so over the top that I found myself quirking an eyebrow at your sanity. Then, I remembered that it is YOUR work that I'm reading here. Am I off topic much? Only slightly. My point in three words: This was hilarious. Kudos.
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Hello stranger. Haven't seen you in ages. Well what can i, this is a birthday tribute. If you can say something great, why bother right? Thanks for commenting.
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So cute
This is divine. And humourous too. He should love it.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Brilliant!!
Gosh it helps if I can type Geeeeeeeeeeesh!
Wow! What a Birthday offering and I tell You~
Love it!!
I can imagine a smile
on his face after reading this
He can make the quill dance~ Thank You for sharing
this Gem for a Gem!
Precious Spirit who has a huge fan base..
I'm the *ditto* girl
I wonder why I don't normally enter contests where both You guys have posted
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you precious. Just trying to offer up something worthwhile.
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