your fingers l~a~c~e~d through mine
tears w.e.t.t.i.n.g my shirt
[silent.sobs] when you think I'm asleep
"its okay babe, open up to me"
*nothings wrong
*I swear I'm fine
*I'm just not feeling well...
doll, the -/c|u\-/t|s\- on your wrist don't lie
my hand pressed |close| to your bruised cheek
you (close) your eyes;;; lean into me
&& whisper so-so-quietly into my chest;;;
"this world will never be
what I expected...
&& if I don't belong,
who would have guessed it...
Doll, we knew right from the start
I was nothing special
&& maybe we'll turn it around...
but I can't promise I'll be here in the morning"
My finger.tips graze your cheek
tears f^i^l^l my eyes
"b-b-but Baby....its not to late...
just (smile:
[take my hand]
we'll [pro]create a world of our own
its never too late
to start over..."
you (smile: at me,
)press( your lips to mine
((wrap)) your fingers [t|i|g|h|t] around mine...
&& whisper.... "prove it, babe"
Author notes
wow... this is a POS... Sorry, I tried >.<
TDG - Never too late
A contest entry
- ::Three Days Grace:: [.TDG inspired poems.] by SarahEatsAirplane.
650 points, ended June 11, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congrats on the gold...you really deserved it for this one...the imagery and the workding...oh so emotional and i loved it...you did a super sweet job with incorporating the TDG song in with it...its one of my fav. songs and you used it to your full advantage...the lines
you (smile: at me,
)press( your lips to mine
((wrap)) your fingers [t|i|g|h|t] around mine...
&& whisper.... "prove it, babe"
brilliant...great job and keep writing...
xXsewn2getherXx
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I loved this. Very emotional and deep. I can definitely relate; for both myself and someone I'm involved with right now. And I love this song, also. Great write!
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This is really good bby. I love it. Its sad but beautiful.
your fingers l~a~c~e~d through mine
tears w.e.t.t.i.n.g my shirt
[silent.sobs] when you think I'm asleep
"its okay babe, open up to me"
*nothings wrong
*I swear I'm fine
*I'm just not feeling well...
doll, the -/c|u\-/t|s\- on your wrist don't lie
I just love this its wonderful. Good luck in the contest.
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'My finger.tips graze your cheek
tears f^i^l^l my eyes
"b-b-but Baby....its not to late...
just (smile:
[take my hand]
we'll [pro]create a world of our own
its never too late
to start over..."
you (smile: at me,
)press( your lips to mine
((wrap)) your fingers [t|i|g|h|t] around mine...
&& whisper.... "prove it, babe"'
WOW
I love this!!! =]=] i even bookmarked it =]
love those lines =] ♥
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actually... this is very emotional.
i really do like this.
you used the lyrics from the song very nicely...
i say great job.
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reminds me of my && my boy lately.
i love the feeling you captured here.
good luck.
<333
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