I'm addicted to love,
Addicted to pain.
I'm addicted to drugs,
And addicted to fame.
I'm lost in addictions,
Lost in myself,
Lost in this world,
Lost in what I felt.
I'm so addicted
I can't seem to see
Past what I want,
Past what I need.
I'm a slave to addictions,
I'm a slave to myself,
I'm a slave to others,
And I'm ruining my health.
If I don't get control,
One day I'll die,
A slave to addictions,
Lost in a lie.
Please tell me what you think
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great VERY GOOD
the short lines and ryhme work VERY VERY well here,,,, great job on this one,,,, thanks for sharing -
you suck.................nice poem though
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its a great poem i like form
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I can tell that you put your heart into this poem, and you're good at expressing yourself. My only gripe with this writing is that its a bit one dimensional and subtlety lacks an artistic-tempermant.....keep writing
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great poem... flows nicely... I have to say I think this might be my new fave...
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