Stumbling through the dark
Pain piercing the core of my being
I struggle to maintain strength
My veins full of your venom
Trying to find a release to set myself free
Chills run up and down my spine
as a fire burns within the soul of
this broken woman
Anger making my blood boil
shedding tears
from bleeding eyes
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Oh, wow!!!
That is an INCREDIBLE take on the picture prompt! I just noticed that you have published some of your work. Congratulations!!
I find that so inspirational. Some day, I would be thrilled to see my work in print. I will have to save up for your book, Noreen. 
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Awesome pic and awesome write! Nice work
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good
i'm not sure I completely understand this one, but i feel the passion and that's what matters
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love can be found even if it seems hard.
i thought i would never find it and yet i have it now.
this was lovely and strong
and emotions could be felt
well done
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great
know that there is love and that shall conteract the poison, and i shall give you remedy, and take this to my soul. and you shall be made whole.
no longer broken but clean and made new.
this was really nice.
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Excellent Piece
This is too good my friend. I liked this very much. Good luck in the intergroup contest.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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WOW Powerful
This is amazingly dark.The imagery gives chills up and down the spine...On the freaky factor thermometer I give this the boiling point...
...A write true to the picture and the contest.
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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In some souls the pain is deep.But still our fire burns through proving once again.A true poet shines great poem.W I T R C 10
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YIKES!!! First that picture just makes you cringe...then your write, dark and deep, delivers a chill almost upon reading. Very well written and certainly impacting. Your words linger still as I have finished the read! We have been on a familiar path...yes we have. Always a pleasure to read your work! ~Tia
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Very dark indeed. Lots of imagery filled with darkness and hurt.
Very intriging write.
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Wow!
I am not use to reading write like this from you, but I must say that you definitely did a great job on this one. I wish you the best in your challenge and may god bless you...
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quite a write
deep rite and seems to flow for release from the bleeding eyes. touching!
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ohhh this is great really dark which i havnt seen you write for awhile love it babes totally brilliant xxxx
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OH splendid, of course, I am on the "dark" side these days but what a wonderful picture and your words could not have been more perfect....Speaks of heartache like no other...Good job, good luck!
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Bunnies even. hehe
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This is powerful. I like it.
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