A weeping willow.
Branches gently brush the lake.
Under pale moonlight.
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Yeah. Had to do this for an assignment. I think it's pretty okay.
Please tell me what you think
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nice
its a nice poem that sorta relaxes people -
nice haiku. weeping willow branches brush the lake......?
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ENCORE ENCORE lol that was good haiku!
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ok.....really?
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ok... really?
It's great and so peaceful. I can imgaine myself there!
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I think its better then ok. It shows such great imagery. I can imagine and see the willow brushing against the lake. Nice job!
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Thanks a lot. I was a little iffy about it because I've never written a haiku before.
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