I hated visiting my step Grandpa
He did not talk that much
But every holiday
We would keep in touch
I went to see him and Nanny
He didn't like the black clothes I'd show
Every-time I saw him
He'd just sit back and say 'Whoa'
Two months ago, he died
He left me in two
I wish I once said the words
"Grandpa, I love you."
Now, I've learn to say how I feel
I tell everyone what I know
That I could've just said I love you
Now I sit there saying whoa
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Sniffle sniffle. I wish I sad I love you to my grandpa too. great write.
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God...and I don't believe in such entity... but I can relate to this so much so do appreciate... Thank you for the reminiscence. Peace.
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