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A ghostly night
fueled by fright
their lives were lost
to the holocaust.

And in the showers
a silent death
with nothing but
the corpses left.

And through the gates the day before,
they dragged so many,many more
they stripped them nake, wit hal to bare
they took their lives no care.

They prayed together
behind those gates
they prayed for the stop
of such senseless hate

They begged and pleaded
their lives for nought
for death was all
the Germans brought

And at day's end
with nothing to loose
they slaughtered them
those poor Jews

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hey peoples okay as you can see this poem has no title i couldnt come up with something that fitted just nice but if you do then please leave your suggestion anything is welcome( i mean anything!) hope you enjoyed thanks for reading

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  • BarbedWireButterfly
    June 2, 2007

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    very deep. it's a very interesting topic world war 2 and you showed it well through this poetry (the sadness and hardship of it) well done twin. nice work


  • smntha.
    May 31, 2007
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    Holocaust is all I can think of. This was awesome and so true. I've always been fascinated by the holocaust. Great piece!!!