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Here with you

I'm here with you,
in a great, complex mess
I haven't had any better days,

I expect nothing more,
I expect nothing less

When it feels like war around us,
all we have to do is kiss
and everything will be okay

I know we'll fly, I know we'll soar
I'm full of bliss

It's like magic,
that thing that connects me and you
I wish I knew what more to say

Without you, life would be such a chore
I love you, I truly do

Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}

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there;s a hidden message in there, if you can figure it out, I'll travel across the whole world to where you are and give you a hug. I hope you like it!

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 2, 2007
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    its certainly about your love for someone close to you and you obviously want to help them and make them happy even if everything seems wrong and down. its like you want to show them all the positive sides to life and hide the negative away from them.
    a wonderful write with such description and love and care.
    very well written well done