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Intoxicating Beauty (SOTY tribute)

Until the day I die
I spill my heart for you
and the stars will cry
the blackest tears tonight

Hear I am
Pouring my heart onto these rooftops
Talking backwards
I tried to take control of my heart

Now our hands are tied
We can never let it go this far
Nothing can fly with this broken wing
There's so much to hold on to now

I'm still here
I  guess it's too bad
That everything we had was taken away
Intoxicating beauty tears everything down

Author notes

I used several different songs from Story of the Year's Page Avenue CD. I took bits and pieces and tied them together to try and make sense.

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  • Nephlim
    May 26, 2008

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    I heard that first part of the song! I likes the song too, meaning that I loves the poem . And the bits and pieces do make sense and were tied together pretty fluidly! =D
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • BeautifulEyesore.
    May 21, 2008
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    i am too ugly!
    btw love the poem..
    <------ME


  • XBeautiful MistakeX
    May 20, 2008
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    this isnt original...Didnt see much sense in it...