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Oh-So-Sweet

You look at me pathetically
knowing all there is to me
hiding what can't be seen
stealing what I might be thinking
you've constructed a solid image of me
without even having a foundation,
just by dedication and
a few minuets conversation
simple questions earning complex answers
you know me so well
that it frightens me
you stare at me, and I'm uncomfortable
you can sense it and it makes you stronger
my weakness is your food
a honey that makes you seem
oh-so-sweet.
Staring at the floor,
legs crossed
lips tightly shut
slightly shaking,
immobile
yet you say nothing and I
begin to wonder
if your gaze rests upon me.
I'm feeding you the honey
that makes you
oh-so-sweet.
I can't stop my reaction
to your satisfaction but
I seem to be forming an attraction
to your dominance over me.
Your personality is like a pistol
and your eyes like crystal
I can not help my affection for you
a connection, a direction, a reflection
for all that perfection you have inside.
Bet you never guessed I'd be falling for you?
Bet you never guessed you'd be willing to catch me too?
Maybe it is I who knows you best, and still
I am
immobile,
slightly shaking,
lips tightly shut,
legs crossed,
staring at the floor,
maybe you can't read my mind
but that doesn't matter because

you're oh-so-sweet.

Author notes

The poem begins strongly and ends up "weak" and that is how this person feels he or she is being seen by another person, or psycho-analyst or someone analyzing them. It's an uncomfortable feeling for some people. I really don't know where this came from, since I have never been analyzed, at least not to my knowledge, but I probably would feel this way.

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