A thousand poets could pen for a thousand years
And fill many hundreds of pages too
But yet they'd still never find the right words
That truly say ~ I love you ~
Author notes
People tend to write very long poems in order to express their love, im guilty of it myself, when really all it take is three little words...so here's a very short verse which hopes to get that message accross without the need for pages upon pages of writing. thanks for reading, take care xx
A contest entry
- Short and Sweet by deathbyfrootloopsxx.
800 points, ended June 25, 2007, 51 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Short a sweet, really. You showed your love without having to explain it. Loverly
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I could never agree more with this piece. Love is indescribable and incomparable to any words/phrases. You have taken truth and posted it on the town bulletin board.
I loved the rhyming too! Keep up the great work, good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing!
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i hear that.. words are never enough though, actions speak louder than words anyway.. great write and good luck in the contest!
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Most Beautiful Poem Ever Written By The Hands Of An Angel Being You =)
Sweet Sam you have done it again and penned an abolsute masterpiece! I rally do truly admire how depe you penned your poem here and even more so relaly admire how well you posted this poem. short and sweet and that last line really summe dit up., Sweet Sam this is an absolute ingenius poem. excellent work and keep it up Paul =)(=
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very good!!
words are meaningful in a short minute.
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Like the contest title, this was very "short and sweet". Sounds like it would make a great [though somewhat cliche] Hallmark card. Then again, all Hallmark cards are a little bit cliche...
Cute poem, nice job.
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