I'm sitting on the porch right where
you have left me
sitting there, I just stare
at nothing...I just can't see
why did you do it, why didn't you learn
your mistakes from before
down the right path you must have taken a wrong turn
and I feel it in my heart, the deepest core
I feel the teardrops on my face
the arms around me so tight
this pain and fear, I wish to erase
to stand up and win this fight
you tell me it's goodbye
that we might never see each other again
but without you I'd surely die
your the closest then any close friend
I wish I could slow down these times
when it's only me and you
this love my heart binds
me to everything you do
now as I still sit here on the porch
I think of you
as the sun blazes over the treetops like a burning torch
I just know that...we will make it through.
Author notes
this is to my boyfriend jake...
yesterday he came an told me he might be goin to jail for awhile...we dont know whats happenin...an he wanted me to find someone else an not wait for him if worse came to worse...
but ill always stay by his side...
I LOVE JACOB MICHEAL GERMAIN!!
A contest entry
- Straight from the heart. by yellowrose190.
400 points, ended June 2, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i know you wrote to your boyfriend but i feel as though my ex's heart flowed through your words it is a lovely piece and i love it you are a great writer keep it up
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why thanks. sorry this is a late thank you. im glad i can help in someway. that is helpin in some way...is it? well anyways. thanks. ♥
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oh well it would not be the first time i made a wrong move that would end up making my life suck but that i think is part of creation and what ever the government puts into our water keep doing well
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lol okay. thank you for your insight. also sorry this is a late thank you. never know when i get new stuff anymore cuz it doesnt tell me. haha. thanks. ♥
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great write i loved the work and i can fell you in this one great job and hope to read more
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i kno this is a wicked late thank you but thanks for your comment. it never shows me i have any new comments when i do. an there will be plenty more in the future.
♥
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Great
Hey girl WOW another great write i feel your pain there is nothing worse then not being able to be by the side of the person you love but it is good to see great women like you that will stand by ones side no matter what!!!!
I love the way it flows very very heart felt
Great job
Adam24
PS Check out my new one!!!
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awe hey thanks. your comments make me feel in a good mood lol. i will always stand by the one i love. no doubt about that,
an of course ill check out your writes also.
thank you adam.
means alot.
♥
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the hardest thing in jail is to know that someone is out there waiting for you, that is a endless hell, torment that will drive a man insane, i know where he is coming from but i even know to a greater point that place where you are coming from, to be without him will be the same, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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heyy
awwe thanks..
an im guessing you must have expienced that...im sorry...but its life and we grow from our mistakes. thanks
♥
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