Dont put my fire out
It burns in pashin for you
I'll love you to the end my dear
So I'll wait up for you
Author notes
written inspired for tommy nolland
A contest entry
- Poems and Songs by gentle breeze.
495 points, ended June 4, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like that this is short and to the point. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Very Touching
A wonderful tribute to a love hopefully returning the same! Words to show the love you have for life and the right person to share it with. Love ya, Gramps
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Hi. Thanks for entering this contest. I can only accept the entry if the poem was inspired by a song or another poem. I f it is, you need to put a link to the poems/ lyrics (or the words themselves) in your author notes. Thanks.
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Nice job! Very good in such a short peace!
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