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Why Should I Cry for You?

I'm sitting here and thinking
Of all the times we shared
Every moment is so crystal clear
Like the photos in the album book
The treasures in the chest

There are times that I just want you
Grab you up and make you mine
But these moments come in cup-holds , fist-holds
Whatever is in store
Then you always come and go

So I'm asking,why should I cry for you?

Chorus

All you did was hurt me
Made me runaway
But I'm tired of fighting you
I'm just tired of you
You're my greatest screw up
So Why should I cry for you?


Why should I cry for you?


Everyday I had to worry
If your mood was gonna change
One day you were my hero
The only one I loved
Then the next day you were gone
You fuckin' left me all alone

All ask for was your honesty
Your sanity
Your Love
But all you did was break me in
And made me go insane

So I'm asking why should I cry for you?

Chorus


Don't you think it's time for us to grow up
And stop playing these silly games
I've grown , I've Changed , I'm different
So baby why won't you do the same
Because I'm not here to play the fool
I have a life to live

These tears will dry up on their own
And envaporate before your eyes
No need to worry about me dear
I know I'll know I'll just be fine
It's you have to worry 'bout

Chorus


So I'm asking you why should I cry for you

Did you ever cry for me?

All those days and all those nights

I just want you to know I'll be allright

Author notes

i think you can consider this anger

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  • flounder416
    February 13

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    Yupp anger

    Very well done! Reminds of someone I once knew.. I really like this one, in fact, I read it a couple of times. I look forward to reading more of your works and I wish you the best of luck! Keep up the good writing:]


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    May 31, 2007

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    Yes

    Anger is the word I would use to describe this. Anger and sadness and a determination to move on and forward in life, with or without him. YOur last couple of stanzas could use some tightening up. I think maybe the anger got to you and you got a little careless a little ranty.

    Thanks for the read

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • Bryan-CarnelianHope
    May 30, 2007

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    Woooooooow!! ^.^

    I love it!! You should definatly consider lyrical writting if you already haven't! I love the chorous! EXCELLENT work
    -Bryan-


  • Angel of Musik
    May 30, 2007
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    mmmmm. That burns with pain, anger and love. Simply wonderful. Thank you