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The rain on my window,
Like the rain in my eyes.
Every time I look at you,
Every inch of me cries.

But you still kiss me,
Still call me baby.
Still say you love me,
She's not there to stay.

It broke my heart to hear.
Just seconds after we ended.
You were lying next to her,
You slept with my friend.

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"Something In The Way"

Basically, me and my fiance split because he cheated one too many times. Seconds later, he was with the very girl he cheated on me with. But he'll still sit there, calling me his baby, telling me he loves me, kissing me. My head is screwed.

I think I'll go blow my brains against the ceiling.

Luff ya

x x

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  • Dead Star--x
    June 4, 2007
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    yea fuck guys and their mind tricks! i got cheated on once and i completely broke into shards, & i wouldve gone back with him but im glad i didnt because it wouldve hurt worse---hes cheated on every girl since the one he cheated on me with..... its better to let go now then to hold on get broken further, best of luck ♥ be strong
    PoisonX


    • NicotineHeartbreak
      June 5, 2007
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      Yeah, most guys are assholes. I found someone better though, he's never cheated on anyone, even though his ex did him, and is so sweet.

      Luff ya

      x x


  • Another Conciousnes
    June 1, 2007
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    I can't find the words to say to you, I just hope to talk to you soon.
    jake

    • NicotineHeartbreak
      June 3, 2007
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      Thanks honey. I hope we talk soon too. It isn't all that bad really, because there's a guy who has liked me for ages, just never said because I had a boyfriend, and I like him too, he's so much better than my ex.
      So I'm okay, I bounced back as usual.
      How are you doing?

      Luff ya

      x x


  • zillion
    May 30, 2007

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    That sucks that he cheated on you! Especially since the two of you were going to get married.

    Jeez, that's men for ya'.

    -Khourey

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