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Mr. Thirteen

 



A gift,

from the Emerald Isle,

home to Mr. Thirteen himself;

deputized

with a badge of light

in the darkness he dwells.

 

In the mundane

this youth blossoms yet,

hourglass sands fail

to mark accurate date

of his spirit's birth.

 

Mr. Congeniality treks

poetry pages armed

with bolts of quick wit to jolt

the numbest of funny bones.

 

Cunningly charismatic

he creeps, hidden beneath

a cloak of invisibility, ready to stun

unsuspecting poets with his

electrifying personality.

 

As howls echo through the trees,

the newest member of the pack

runs with the best

in search of those in need,

lost in this vast forest of poetry.



Author notes

Graphic created by Cyberartist for Electric Sunrise
and is being used with permission from Electric Sunrise



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  • Silence of Finality
    June 11, 2007
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    What a beautiful piece! Your talents are still going strong I see.


  • catz Moderators member
    June 4, 2007

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    Congratulations on the Silver, a truly unique and pretty darn cool write It fits our Phil to a tee.

    Dee

  • in-the-twilight
    May 30, 2007

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    This is really great Auntie Bel... and the pic at the top is fun... great job! Loved it and good luck! Rock on! xoxo Meg


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    May 30, 2007

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    Woot!

    Yay! This is really a wonderful piece and I think you you've done a great job summing him up in this one. He is a treasure to be sure. Awesome tribute


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    Wonderfully and beautifully created, Bel! I've missed reading your fine talents and so, I count it a privilege to read you again....awesome write! All the bst to you in this contest!


  • Illusionaire Moderators member
    May 30, 2007

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    Well aren't you just a little angel, this contest only further inflates my ego, ahem i mean hits my soft spots, lol but no really, this is so sweet, thank you very much xx

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