i won't stay quiet
after all these years
i'm not going to fight it
because they're my fucking tears
i won't look at you
in any way thats nice
i'll never love this family
because you've blown it more than twice
i'll sit here in the dark
with only a knife and my cat
i'll dream up a wonderful dream
where i beat you with the bat
i wont forgive the loss
that you should have had
i'll never call you mom and mean it
and i know you're not my dad
i've tried to confront the choice
that's always been at mind
wonder what came out of it
- nothing, but just time
i'm never going to silence myself
instead i'll throw the dice
and i sure as Hell don't care enough
to censure my poetry in ICE.
ice, ice baby!
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I like this a lot i like how you go from one line stnaza's to 4 it adds to the effect
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Damn!
Girl you got it going on. i love it and whats more I needed it. This poem awakes me from my normal despair. i miss talking to you and getting advice and shit! Well Good write keep it up we all need a little dark in our lives to recognize the light! Love you cuzzo!
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Holy shit do i like the imagery in this. It's strong and the emotions are rich. I really like this one. I really love your poems, you should have a book published. I know I would buy it!
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Exciting!!! Nice Write!!!
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i love this one mom this one is great keep it u pfull of emotion you write so much better than me! *hugs her* love you mom so don't ever feel that way!
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I really liked this peace my dear. It was full of such emotion. I know this must be hard for you, but things will get better for you, I know they will. You have told me of your plans and you will be happy.
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ah, come on, don't hurt the cat.
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