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Until Again

I'm so very proud of you
You just don't know
I got a chance to say good-bye
Before I watch you go
It'll be tough for a little while
But soon enough I'll be okay
And I feel so very sure
You and I will meet again someday
It may not be tomorrow
Not even the day after that
But we will see each other again
That I know for a fact
I'll miss your smiling face
And your shining blue eyes
But just until "again"
This is our teary good-bye

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  • LaurenLightning--x
    June 21, 2007
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    Aww,,

    This is beautiful.
    But so sad.
    I love it, and can seriously relate.
    The rhyming really adds to the poem and helps with the flow. It's amazing, and the imagery is immense. This put such vivid pictures in my head.

    Well done!! This poem is brilliant.

    KetFace - Magic xX