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xXx ::WHORE:: xXx

the uglyest bitch alive
should be fucking dead
how i loathe the fact that
i can't stick i knife through her head!

the uglyiest bitch alive
should rot in the core of Hell
only then would i feel safe
and manage to fucking sleep well!

the uglyiest bitch alive
is sadly related to me
i'd love to spit in her coffin
wouldn't you come to see?!!


this is proudly:
detacated to my stupid whore of a mother.

fucking write me! LOL.

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  • MisVampy
    September 29, 2007
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    I would come and see my dear, I know how you feel. beautiful work.


  • Just Myself
    September 19, 2007
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    oooohhh impressive

    very well expressed


  • MoonHaze
    June 1, 2007
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    Damn, could you be any more pissed at her. Jeesh. Well then again I've written similiar to this for my father but meh' Anyways I like this. It's filled with a lot of anger which isn't unusual for you. lol. Anyways keep writing I really love your poems.


  • ItalianPride09
    June 1, 2007
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    holy shit love the write so out its amazin!!!


  • Olivias Violin
    May 30, 2007
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    I can understand your feelings, but this can't be your best poetic expression.


    • Tripple-HeadedDevil
      May 30, 2007
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      how would you know? its not like you know me.

      i can write better yes, these are just words put into poetry. who are you to judge? nobody, that's right!

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