(1st Verse)
This food for thought, taste nutrition in these real compositions/
Sit and listen live reportin' from my dimension, an extension of the mind-/
That intertwines with the heart inclined with art and rhyme/
I start to climb past father time/
No menopause but me pause your mediocre rhymes/
Yours ain't hard as mine, realness is hard to find within the matrix/
Use to be a calm oasis but we replaced it/
With this other territory full of drug dealer stories/
Thug niggaz roads to glory, same song leave me snorin'/
The brainstorms no longer pouring, it's getting kinda borin'/
I'm askin' brotha please, when will it stop/
Words that you feel were killed with real Hip-Hop/
I breathe new life in to the culture like God did Adam/
Give my ribs to this song like Adam gave Eve/
Watch me transform this song into a cool summer breeze with ease/
Get you so high that you get a nose bleed
(Chorus)
Come go with me and explore this floetry/
I do it naturally like ocean shores/
I open doors for you to see inside of me intuitively/
To you from me/
R-A-P rhythm and poetry
(2nd Verse)
Got Smith and Wesson type power but as gentle as a flower/
Guns and roses that bring April showers to cowards/
Devour lyrically with bouquets and bullets, my clip the fullest/
The best of both worlds, I be tha baddest and the goodest/
The most protected, most respected, I God's selected/
Check it, The Virghost that The Most resurrected/
And manifested in me what poetry produced/
I pray to Jesus my destiny is not concluce/
To go on forevermore through similes and metaphors/
When Revelations restore, explore my afterlife like it's before eternity/
Like infinity starts before the dawn of man/
Y'all don't understand, the prefix of my thesis/
The need this; my future nephews and nieces/
As time decreases, less time to find the shattered pieces/
Of a mass heart torn apart, the heart of my community/
I bring the unity, for his disease I am the immunity/
(Chorus)
Come go with me and explore this floetry/
I do it naturally like ocean shores/
I open doors for you to see inside of me intuitively/
To you from me/
R-A-P rhythm and poetry
(3rd Verse)
This the Miseducation of D. Somerville like Lauryn Hill/
Everything is everything and real is real/
Got skills so chill, I'll prove it to you, how you want it/
I spit it in a rap, sing it to you, recite a sonnet/
Cyber sonic, send you to space, get you high like chronic/
I personify electronics cuz I'm mechanical with the pencil/
And other writing utensils, so lethal with boligrafos/
Worldwide way outside los Ustados Unidos/
To my beautiful Black people, here some music to inspire/
Get you higher, cuz Hip-Hop today is so tired/
That's why I'm old school like TV's with the pliers/
You still dream for plasma screens like the world desires/
When all you really need is for God to be witcha/
And walk in the path that Jesus quoted in the scriptures/
I paint a picture, and this beat is the canvas/
From Africa to Kansas, D revolves around the planet.....
Author notes
Just a rap I wrote.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Feelin' This
I enjoyed this man. Your content is ON...POINT. The syllable structure isn't consistent throughout and neither are the lines but you know what, when you write something on the fly those details can come later. Your content is undeniable. So many lines stick out to me, and those ones are the ebst structured as well.
"This the Miseducation of D. Somerville like Lauryn Hill/
Everything is everything and real is real/
Got skills so chill, I'll prove it to you, how you want it/
I spit it in a rap, sing it to you, recite a sonnet/"
DIRTY LINES MAN! Crazy sh*t! I just started getting back into rapping...haven't written in 3 years. If you ever come back on AP...check me out! Later! 8/10)! -
Keep spittin' dat fi, king.
Peace & Love

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You stupid for this! OMG! Can't wait til we collab again. I miss this side of you D. Glad to have you back. -theQueen" (MsUnderstood)


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you just spit some fire on these verse, you kinda of remind me of myself ... in the lyrical department ... keep on writing don't give up . Hey you still want to do a collabo... just holla ... mad e respect 4 ya work




