You know what,
I'm finished with this.
Keep him,
He's all yours now.
You can stay up,
Worry where he is,
Who he's with,
What he's doing.
No more will I surrender,
My time is mine alone.
No more waiting,
Staring at the phone.
If he calls,
Who cares?
He's not my problem,
Not anymore.
I've let this go,
For far too long.
Letting him consume,
My thoughts and dreams.
He swore to me,
He'd love me forever,
Always be there,
I was his one and only.
No,
He lied,
Like they all do.
While he was "loving me",
He was making time with you.
You wanted him,
Had to have him,
Didn't want me around.
You knew,
Even before I did,
That he played us both.
But it hasn't stopped you,
You keep reaching,
Wanting more.
Well,
He's all yours.
I'm not fighting over him,
I'll give him to you,
All wrapped in a bow.
You can scream,
Yell and taunt,
But you're not going to get it,
There will be not be any,
Cat Fight.
A contest entry
- Titles or Word Bank! by Sukrit Raman.
540 points, ended June 23, 2007, 13 entries
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That is right you are better off without him and better off that he is spomeone elses problem. Very Good!
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WONDERFIUL WRITE
Oh you have written what alot of us feel like writing. Your words say it all. You do deserve better and it will only be a matter of time before he hurts her. Guarenteed!!!! This was such a pleasure to read the way I feel today. Great write!!!! Take care, Sandy
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wow... strong emotion overflowing in this one! great job.
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he lied...keep him!
Well written! There's an element of bitterness which suits the subject matter perfectly.
Great work. Good luck with the contest!
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very good
Poet, i am just passing by, but having a look at your work, i am really touched by this. Though sad, it is, i am for the content. It is true to the marrow. I would like to add u on my favorite if u dont mind. I will keep looking at your poems. GOOD BLESS U. Good day
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