You tossed our pages in your wind
slipping through the book of curious sin
asking for more than could fulfill your call
creating our lasting final fall
freedom is to each ....while excepting its price
circling back to bite twice
traveling dreams if meant to be
that is the glue that seals like concerte
memories will live on
the beat is in tuned ... the lyrics are penned to our song
time has skipped us to our separate ways
grains of sand has tugged through our yesterday
legacy with true connections will never completely fade
the gift of my key belongs to only one... to amaze
Although, some have attempted to keep it bound
a true jewel is pricless when committment is found!
I'll soar our journey pages in hand
Eternity
has not forgotten! but time pushes on.... words are written..... we will meet again
There you will find me with pen in hand..
Tossing back my captive smile everytime!
KT
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I'll soar our journey pages in hand
Eternity
some rhythm tweaking maybe yet otherwise,
the sea would delight in this freedom, this stone and sky truth, especially the sentiments you related with grace of your one true soul mate, it would wave and sing songs of the dolphins and swans and stories that would create the surfers joy in the moment, and so i"ll say well done jazz with a shinning smile and pina colladas -jas
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"time has skipped us to our separate ways
grains of sand has tugged through our yesterday"
This part hit close to home just the other day I was reminiscing on the good old days and how times change this part pretty much sums up the way I feel
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I thought this poem was excellent. You had me all caught up in its words. I wanted to throw paper and stuff out the window and just do things i have never done before.
You did awesome on this. Keep penning .
Poeticanjil -
I absulutely Loved this Piece........
so much emotion in your words.......
I love these type of poems!!!!!!!
how you make me feel as if i was actually there
in that moment........
Not many people can capture feelings
as well as you have in the poem.......
How every line flows nicely into the next......
great write!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cant wait to read more of your poems!!!!!!
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Thats amazing! love the word choices!
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This is beautiful. Your imagery is great. Your choice of words are awesome. I love these loves::::::
time has skipped us to our separate ways
grains of sand has tugged through our yesterday
legacy with true connections will never completely fade
the gift of my key belongs to only one... to amaze
Although, some have attempted to keep it bound
a true jewel is pricless when committment is found
They are amazing. The flow is awesome> Thank for the read and keep on writing
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