Amid the cold waters
In the bright shades of darkness
Where there has never been light
There is a place
We can all find peace
The only space
For that reason alone
People do not exist
For if they did
War could find
A way to
Light up
The
Darkness
A contest entry
- ~ Peace~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended June 14, 2007, 17 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is most interesting... it left me pondering as Tearz said because it could go in many different directions, wherever the reader might like to go! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Frogz~ -
Well William you have left us all something to ponder over.. I have read this a few times and can go in a few directions with it,
Thank you for sharing,
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz -
interesting. I liked the ending of this piece. It made me think of why there might always be places in the world that will always have conflict. Because most of the people in this world just can't get along with each other. Good write and good luck in the contest.
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