Oh God
when a baby is assimilating to walk
it always stumble
the father of a kid continuously raise his hands
to rescue the descendant making him to stand once again
similarly you proceed with me
all the time
Oh God...
Author notes
Inspired by a picture
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2350780
A contest entry
- Spiritual Inspiration #1 by Samplette.
450 points, ended June 2, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Baby steps...I like this image of a loving father who "continuously raises his hands to rescue the descendant"...who is me...and you...and all of us here...I take great comfort from this write Prabhu, and I thank you for writing from your heart so simply here...Peace to you, Rhonda
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God does keep close to us to help us up when we stumble. A beautiful write. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Short, brief and packs a whollup of comfort, knowing he is there all the time with you! Well done, Best of luck!
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Dear PrabhuDayal
This is a great poem and I enjoy the way you speak to God as a child does to a parent. Kudos on a great write dear brother and best wishes in the contest.
Hugs and love,
Your loving sister,
Petra xo
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