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Paradise

You took my hand and said let's bolt
And like lightning, we left with a jolt
Going so fast, the car protested
Amazing we didn't get arrested
One our way to paradise

A rusty motel, hell I don't care where we go
As long as we go somewhere I can show

My fire licked body
Where I can hope someone saw me
And helps me wake up to fame

In paradise
You get the best of fire and ice
Those hot little seniorita's
Tangy glasses of tequila
Damn baby, do I feel alive
In paradise

As night falls down, things heat up just right
If you treat me just right I might
Burn up your eyes and rock your body
You be seabiscuit and I'll be the jockey
As we soar high in paradise

We can dance wild baby, or drop it real low
Then people could say I could really show

Sexy fluid movements of my hips
The arrousing kiss that touches your lips
Someone who can give me a wonderful night

In paradise
You no longer in disguise
Break free and lose it
Look at the locals and take no shit
It would be so easy to survive
In paradise

Author notes

Not one of my best works.

Not too good of a poem... little on the comedian side I think. Comment accordingly.

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