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.Beauty of Nature

Even before the clock ticks dawn
dreams describing tragedy themes
bid good bye to the bad night

The flowers start
blossoming to full shapes
vases get ready to host roses in bunches

Butter flies hurriedly sit and stick on the flowers
quenching their thirst with jaggery  sweet nectar
The alarm starts belling the guitar sounds
waking up all the living world to glance at the beautiful nature

The waves in  flowing streams smile at the trees
weaving their heads on the shores at ease

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  • Katie Lazette
    May 31, 2007

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    Nicely Written

    I like your poem about nature. It has good imagery, good content and flow. I like Butterflies, they move so quickly and land so gentle.


  • Olivias Violin
    May 30, 2007
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    nice

    I like the line "vases get ready to host roses in bunches".