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Sadistic Perfection

[S]olve this little riddle darling,

[A]nd baby don't forget.

[D]on't ever question my rhymes,

[I]s this love over yet?

[S]tarry nights remind me of,

[T]he nights you remained bound.

[I] locked you up and kept you,

[C]ruel blood drips onto the ground.

[P]erfecting your pretty wrists,

[E]very tainted little lie.

[R]emember those little kisses babe?

[F]luttering like butterlies.

[E]legantly dying under my control,

[C]ontaminating your precious airwaves.

[T]ime for your finally kiss darling,

[I]t's time to lie within your grave.

[O]nly if I could have saved your life,

[N]ever could I control myself with a knife.

Author notes

3- Acrostic Poems:

Pick one of the following words or your user name and create an
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-Sadistic Perfection

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  • autumns rising
    May 30, 2007
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    Lovin it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Powerful and fantastic, your emo sayings are as beautfiul as you lol!! =] Have a great day sis, Love ya

    "[S]tarry nights remind me of,

    [T]he nights you remained bound.

    [I] locked you up and kept you,

    [C]ruel blood drips onto the ground."
    very kool


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    May 30, 2007

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    WOW! This was an awesome poem hun! I really liked this acrostic poem that you wrote. It flowed really well and your words were very powerful and they gave me chills. You are a really talented author. I also really like the way you added an accent to the first letters of each sentence it was a really nice touch. This was a great poem and reminded me of a few things that i can really relate to. All in all your a talented author and i enjoyed reading this. Keep writting hun, thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

    xoxoxox

    ~Chrissy~


    • CazzieJade
      June 7, 2007
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      I changed my name before this contest ended just letting you know..
      it was: burrdifly
      is now: cazzacatastrophe--x